tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7878685767200870137.post1300415551896514700..comments2023-09-16T01:36:04.087+10:00Comments on Slightly Moderated Stream of Consciousness: 4.Lorenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10411602545537504295noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7878685767200870137.post-4063948457072019222008-10-12T18:47:00.000+10:002008-10-12T18:47:00.000+10:00Dialogue is a tricky animal. Conventional wisdom s...Dialogue is a tricky animal. Conventional wisdom says make it sound real without it being too real. In life our verbiage occurs in fits and starts, with many ums and ahs, transcribed directly to the page it doesn't make for good reading. I went for a snappy easy to read style here. I notice that C's and Daly's locution is almost totally interchangeable. When talking with friends this kind of conversational equilibrium often occurs, I'm not so sure that it’s useful for distinguishing characters voices though. Maybe I got too real.Lorenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10411602545537504295noreply@blogger.com